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Letβs try somethingβ¦
How would you feel if I were to write lots of really long sentences all cluttered together without any line breaks, so they also created long paragraphs, like what Iβm doing right now? I imagine it would be quite annoying to read if I were to continue writing like this for this entire email. Youβd probably want to hit the back button as fast as possible, and you probably wouldnβt want to open any future emails from me either. So Iβm going to stop doing it now.
Whew π
Thatβs better!
Glad to be out of that mess!
If you hadnβt noticedβ¦
I tend to write one sentence per paragraph in my newsletter.
And I tend to break up long sentences onto multiple linesβ¦
because it makes reading and skimming WAY easier.
Especially on phones.
You may also notice that some paragraph only have one or two words.
Itβs true. β good example
Why Should You Break Up Your Text?
The goal is to associate your brand with convenience and usabilityβ¦
Not with annoying walls of text that only your mom will read π
Otherwise, people will simply:
See you as an amateur.
Close your website tab.
Scroll past your posts.
Ignore your emails.
π Use these formatting tips to be more concise, readable, and engaging.
Letβs break some rulesβ¦

Grammar, Punctuation, and Style for the Modern Communicator (psstβ¦ thatβs you.)
Most of these tips are for newsletters and tweetsβ¦
But they also work for websites, landing pages, digital products, etc.
Use big headings to allow people to skim your content.
Use one sentence per paragraph and vary your sentence lengths.
Learn to be concise:
Avoid useless phrases
In my opinionShorten phrases
In order to β> to
so that you can β> so you canUse stronger verbs to avoid adverbs
I ran quickly β> I sprinted
Try using ellipses (β¦) to split up a sentence onto two linesβ¦
like Iβm doing with this one.
Em dashes (β) let you add an extra idea or example to a long sentence β like this one.
Use bold, italics, and CAPS to highlight key phrases.
Style your text in a different colour to make it stand out.
And donβt be afraid to start a sentence with βandβ.
Emojis in Business? Hell Yeah π€
Unless youβre writing for traditional boomers who donβt like anything different from their morning oatmeal and 6 oβclock newsβ¦
Emojis are your friend.
Use emojis to help convey the tone of a sentence:
Wacky? π
Curious? π€
Sarcastic? π
π Use a hand to point to your CTAs.
Use an arrow to direct the eyes down β
Try using π for something important.
π works well for introducing tools.
π₯ Use fire for pro tips or hot topics.
The more you break up your text and use visual cuesβ¦
the easier it is to read.
Of course, formatting text canβt help bad writingβ¦
Your content needs to be crystal clear to be effective.
Read this 1-minute post on writing more clearly:
π€ Robert
P.S. Did you notice one other way I broke up the text in this newsletter? Hit reply and let me know.
ANSWER TO LAST WEEKβS RIDDLE
I am always hungry. I must always be fed.
The finger I touch, will soon turn red.
What am I?
β Fire
TODAYβS RIDDLE
Forward, Iβm heavy. Backward, Iβm not. What am I?
ββ
If you think you know the answer, hit reply and let me knowβ¦ or find out in next Tuesdayβs newsletter.
Share this newsletter with a friend or Iβll steal your shift key β§
Follow me on Twitter or Iβll sing Baby Shark for 10 hours π¦


